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Brighter than the Sun

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We can burn brighter than the sun.. -Fun

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My half of me and :iconmegan10123:'s art trade. Check out her beautiful creation here. It's gorgeous. :squee: I actually made this weeks ago, just now uploading. This was my first time outlining and attempting muscle definition. Does it look alright? Thank you so much =Kiska-Designs for helping me with the musc. def. and ~BrookeDesigns for joining me and makin' it fun. You guys rock! :highfive:

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Tools: Gimp 2.6, Wacom Tablet Pen+Touch.
Favorite Parts: Outline. :la:
Least Favorite Parts: Eye.
Time: 3 hours maybe.

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Outlining tutorial~Muscle definition tutorial~Eye tutorial~Forest~Arabian

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Please critique! Constructive comments are highly appreciated. :iconromanlaplz:

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carelesscosmos
    Good points
    - Mane; its a great shape. ( maybe just add a few more shadows and strands )
    - Lighting; Its really good, looks like the horse belongs there
    - Blending; like the horse's hooves were there.

    Impovement ponts
    - Tail; it looks really.... weird. And its really short. I would re draw it, so that's its more flowly and behind the horse.
    - Eye; it was the first thing I saw. Maybe choose more neutral colors like a softer green
    - Cutting; I see some of the orginial background by the tail & under the neck a little bit. I would use the eraser tool, and a hard small brush and erase those

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      All in all its a good manip, keep it up! :3